考研英语作文(1)
tags:
- English
- 考研
石雷鹏 英语作文
第一次课
小作文思路（应用作文）
审题
- 背景
- 题材（letter/email,notice)+ 内容要求（描述）
- 正式/非正式+格式
内容
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首段1-2句：
a. 写给熟人：首句寒暄，二句目的
b.写给陌生人或机构:自我介绍和目的
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中间段4-6句：按题目要求写相应的内容，并辅以感谢，强调，对比、建议，说明等功能表达，完成写作。
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尾段（再次）致歉，感谢、期待、展望等。
ex 1
Dear Mr. Wang, I am very delighted to recall the past two months when I worked as an editor for your magazine. However, I am writing for the purpose of quiting since this work is not what I expected. It was your and other colleagues' tremendous help that enabled me to accumulate certain ability and experience. Thus I am quite grateful to you for your help. Anyway,my competence, compared with the demands of this job, is not adequate and I cannot do it well. In addition, I am keen on computer science rather than editing. To conclude, it is not advisable for me to continue this work. Finally, I truly hope that you can stand in my shoes and accept my apologies. Yours sincerely, Li Huaex2
Dear Bob,
It is so great to recall the past days when I studied in Canada and stayed in your house. However, I am writhing to apologize because I for got to return a CD to you.
I am quite grateful for your kind help and it was your help that enabled me to enjoy a comfortable and fruitful trip of learning in Candanda. Anyway, compared with you, I am more careless and I did not find your CD in my luggage until I came back to China.Accordingly, I intend to send it back immediately by EMS. Of course, if there is any better solution you prefer, please feel free to inform me.
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Gpt gen
Dear Bob,
I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to take a moment to express my sincere apologies for inadvertently taking your CD back to China with me. Looking back on the incredible time we spent together while I was studying in Canada, I am truly grateful for your friendship and hospitality.
I understand that the CD holds sentimental value to you, and I deeply regret any inconvenience or distress this may have caused. Please know that it was an honest mistake, and I am truly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
If there is anything I can do to rectify this situation or make it right, please do not hesitate to let me know. I value our friendship and want to ensure that it remains strong despite this unfortunate incident.
Thank you for your understanding and forgiveness. I hope we can continue to stay in touch and share more wonderful memories in the future.
Take care and best regards,
[Your Name]
功能句总结
- It was your tremendous help that enabled me to enjoy a comfortable and fruitful trip of learning in your country.(强调句)
- Apologize again for and inconvenience or distress this may have caused.
- I hope this letter finds you well.
- Looking back on the incredible time we spent together while I was studying in Canada, I am truly grateful for your friendship and hospitality.
- If there is anything I can do to rectify this situation or make it right, please do not hesitate to let me know.
- I value our friendship and want to ensure that it remains strong despite this unfortunate incident.
- I hope we can continue to stay in touch and share more wonderful memories in the future.
- Anyway,my competence, compared with the demands of this job, is not adequate and I cannot do it well. In addition, I am keen on computer science rather than editing.
- To conclude, it is not advisable for me to continue this work.
同义表达
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very/quite/exceeding
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for/since/because/as/
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thus/hence
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competence/ability
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compared with the demands of
第二次课
### ex3
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a senior in/at Peking Univerity who pays great attention to Project Hope, I am writhing for the purpose of finding a candidate since I intend to offer financial help to him.
Project Hope is characterized by warmhearted people's help, which enables a host of poor
children to gain the opportunity of eduacation.
功能句总结
- 自我介绍=身份+定从(使得写信人与收信人产生联系)
- Mr. Sky is characterized by his purity/ by the fact that he is pure.
同义表达
- intend to / want to